Welcome Nau mai, haere mai ki tēnei taonga, Kia ora, I am a student at Rāwhiti School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 27, 2020
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Zara - that is a great story of the annoyed boy - I think I would be quite annoyed if I had to live in the attic and have NO food - arrrrr! I am so glad he finally got a birthday present and won the race. Maybe his life will be so much better now! Keep up your great writing! Helen
ReplyDeleteCool story Zara!
ReplyDeleteI like how you labelled the things in your picture, it was easy for me to tell what I was looking at. What did you publish our story on? Was it google draw or something else?
Brogan
It was on google drawings.
Deleteok zara
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